Your poem was wonderful. Donít change a word.
Your description of nature was awesome and I canít see how you could possibly
I liked your poem. It was really nice.
Wow! fantastic! Youíre the next Shakespeare. You are such a gifted writer that I wish I
could write like you
Hi Yma, this poem doesn't really seem to be a poem, but rather thoughts that
are floating around in your head. The last line "Oh well, tomorrow is another day" just about sums up how I felt while reading it. What is this poem about? What are you trying to say? It didn't come across. This entire poem could be chucked.
Yma, I hope youíll sign yourself up for some of the introductory poetry courses at WVU.
If you really want to be a poet, thereís lots you need to study and techniques you need to
learn before posting another poem.
Whatever gave you the idea that you could write poetry. This is the worst crap I have
ever seen. You should give up writing poetry altogether and take up knitting instead.
This poem really sucks big time. It wanders all over the place and says nothing. You
should go back to Grade 1 and learn to spell.
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