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POETRY RESOURCES AND OTHER POETICS FOR POETRY READERS AND POETS

INAPPROPRIATE RESPONSES FOR FEEDBACK

Response Number 1

Your poem was wonderful. Donít change a word.


Response Number 2

Your description of nature was awesome and I canít see how you could possibly improve it.


Response Number 3

I liked your poem. It was really nice.


Response Number 4

Wow! fantastic! Youíre the next Shakespeare. You are such a gifted writer that I wish I could write like you


Response Number 5

Hi Yma, this poem doesn't really seem to be a poem, but rather thoughts that are floating around in your head. The last line "Oh well, tomorrow is another day" just about sums up how I felt while reading it. What is this poem about? What are you trying to say? It didn't come across. This entire poem could be chucked.


Response Number 6

Yma, I hope youíll sign yourself up for some of the introductory poetry courses at WVU. If you really want to be a poet, thereís lots you need to study and techniques you need to learn before posting another poem.


Response Number 7

Whatever gave you the idea that you could write poetry. This is the worst crap I have ever seen. You should give up writing poetry altogether and take up knitting instead.


Response Number 8

This poem really sucks big time. It wanders all over the place and says nothing. You should go back to Grade 1 and learn to spell.


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